James H. Summers - Psychological Horror Fiction Writer
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First Responder — Quick Thoughts

1. How did you feel about the level of on-page violence?

2. How graphic did the violent scenes feel to you?

3. How comfortable were you with the adult situations?

4. Overall, how did the mix of violence and adult content land for you?

5. How much on-page violence is “too much” for you in a horror novel — and did First Responder ever push that line?

6. Do psychological-horror moments hit you harder than physical violence — and which scenes in First Responder lingered with you?

7. Defining question — Amalie & Karen

In a sentence or two, how do you feel about Amalie and Karen — who they are, what they do, how they act and react?